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I really don't know what to say.
i think its cool.....just too small maybe
its too empty and the colors don't go well maybe try a darker bg so u effects on the focal show up better .
its tooo boring and too empty. :P the render is too small and the text is unreadable. :3 Try going back to the basics because right now your execution isn't too effective enough. :P