Requested from me...on another forum...
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...tm-d4bdv80.png
and also another one I made for fun:
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...tm-d4bets3.png
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Requested from me...on another forum...
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...tm-d4bdv80.png
and also another one I made for fun:
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...tm-d4bets3.png
It's ironic, the first one has a lot going on and is messy in composition. The second one is WAY too empty and the negative space brings it down a lot.
Try to balance decent composition and make sure your stuff isn't all messy. Also your text looks pretty bad, I'd drop it as of now.
Kiu!