tried some new stuff

tried some new stuff
http://img42.imageshack.us/img42/7427/newstuffh.png

suggestions?

focal should be blended more. rest is fine gj

I think that you need to make it a little smaller, cause tbh it is a little empty atm, also i think you need to learn more about that style and itll work out, just keep going bro :D GJ