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C&C Please.

http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/7...eedchidori.jpg


http://img444.imageshack.us/img444/8630/abstractart.jpg


http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/3762/theworldv2.jpg


http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/6920/warv3.jpg


http://img44.imageshack.us/img44/3622/ironmanv3.jpg


http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/1317/robotv4.jpg

The last two are the best imo, , I think you should forget about borders and text for now, try and mix up your colours a bit more so its to monotone like in the last tag and work on yo fx, check out some of the dope tutorials on da site too kiu saaan keep improvin.

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Originally Posted by Maietrix

The last two are the best imo, , I think you should forget about borders and text for now, try and mix up your colours a bit more so its to monotone like in the last tag and work on yo fx, check out some of the dope tutorials on da site too kiu saaan keep improvin.

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Funny you should mention the last one being my best because that was actually the worst and oldest one I did imo. I will take your thoughts and considerations into though. I appreciate it and will keep trying to better myself :l

1st: The tones are all over the place and the brightness in the left near the building destroys the focal completely.
2nd: Colours are too bright, too much yellow.
3rd The top of the earth is a bit too contrasted, but I like it :)
4th: Get rid of the border and text, it just looks like a stock with a few minor details to it.
5th: Probably my favourite, but I think the render is a bit too big, it leaves you hardly any space to fill the background in, keep going in that direction with that sig, it's looking good.
6th: Colours are too monotone, get rid of the border & text, too blurred on the sides and the change from that to the render is too sudden and stuff. Also read up on "Rule Of Thirds", meaning your render shouldn't be centered but put slightly to the left or right, looks much better.