1st Large Piece

Well a bunch of c4d`s + some filters and then topaz shit and your turn guys ( C&C ) !
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wow u used allot of topaz man im not liking it too much, lose the topaz and see how it looks . what is it exactly ? most lps people make usually have a theme or some sort of image that represents something or another . any ways it's your first but lets hope u learn from this experience and do better with out so much topaz and just a mess. sry if i was harsh . but of best of luck on your next lp.

So no good :/ Ok .

Hmm i ll be trying something else then thx for advice .

i only like the topaz on the upper part..maybe you should remove the topaz on the bottom part to give it some variation in fx

Its alright for a first attempt..
But things you do on sigs dont always apply to LPs
Try and convey a meaning through the piece