@ first one:
You need to work on your lightning at this one. I guess the cloud thing at the bottom of the signature should be the lightningsource but as i said, it looks more like a cloud. You should try to brighten it up so it can work as a lightningsource. Also brighten the render some. I'm liking the effects you've made, and you did it with some kinda flow wich is nice. Altough I think the left side of the tag is a bit empty. Other then that, it looks pretty cool :D
@ second one:
I'm liking this one more then your first. But also this tag needs some work at his lightning. The focal point (her face), looks too bright. You should try to burn some of it to create some better lightning. I have to say that I love the text :p. Looks great in this kind of tags. Overall it looks really nice. Keep it up :)
11-01-2011, 06:11 AM
nobatteriesincluded
thanks alot mate ;)
i gotta say the 2nd is a oldie ^^
1st is new but ive only been back for 2 days or so ;p
so i think im doing pretty good so far
xx!
11-01-2011, 06:15 AM
cs4pro
haha, well good to see you're getting back into gfx again :)
I like it better alreayd tho you still have to work on the lightningsource. It's too bright atm :p. Maybe you wanna put the lightning source some lower so you can see only a half of it to make it stand out less. I'm not really liking the text, just leave it without text :). The colors are much better and so is the lightning, just needs a little bit of more work. :D
11-01-2011, 06:32 AM
nobatteriesincluded
last update for this tag ;)
wanna start something new