WonLover

Thoughts?

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m...smudgeya11.png

http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m...esmudgeya2.png

Again, a cool and different smudge style. The colors really match with the render.
When you look at it in whole, it kind of seems LQ
good job man

Tone down the sharpening.

I made a couple quick edits.

http://i.imgur.com/coYkK.png

First off, I like the unique styles you have going on, but they still need to fit normal rules.

I liked focal on the left and v2 better but I thought the colors were a tad harsh.

I also blurred a tiny bit where I thought at least a bit of depth should be added. Like everyone else said, watch the sharpening.

I also thought the size you had provided too much negative space that just started to get boring near the top and bottom, so I just cut it out.

Again, I like what you're doing, but refine it a bit. (Don't take my example as an exact thing. It was literally just a super quick edit)

Thanks for da tips, n welcome to da void mannn :)