I took a trip to Haiti recently and took some photos. Note that I'm a total nooby when it comes to photography and this is my first time attempting any sort of photography. So feel free to cnc, but try not to be too harsh D: I will update some as I edit more.
Where did you go exactly? Port-au-Prince, Les Cayes or Leogane?
11-03-2011, 08:06 PM
Hobbit
Heres my criticism and outlook on what you have here:
You're talented when it comes to independant portraitures and natural portraits such as number 3/ 4/ 9 + 11
but theres also a brilliant image I Love < and i dont just say that, thats the chalk board with the vibrant red flowers, such a brilliant image!
Advice on the others ... the two landscape images lack a good composition in my opinion, you cant really see the main point in the images.. uhmm the first bike image in almost a sepia tone is nice as a single.
The black and white of the walkway really in my opinion doesnt fit in at all for some reason. its a great image but it really doesnt show haiti to me,
I love your images! i'd love to see some more you have! maybe post up a contact sheet so i could look? ^^
11-03-2011, 08:38 PM
Atelier
Thanks guys.
Bogui: My mission trip was to a small village called Anse dHainault on the west coast. We flew into Port-au-Prince, then flew to Cayes, then took a 10 hour drive through the mountains to our village.
Hobbit: Thanks! I'd love to show you more, but this is the first time I've ever done photography. :P
EDIT: I do have more Haiti photos, though. Once I edit them, I'll show you.
11-04-2011, 01:10 AM
Derosion
Nice shots!
11-04-2011, 01:19 AM
Dark Method
Not often do I comment on anything like this, but I do have to say that some of these are really nice, especially the one of the chalkboard and the flowers. Nice work. I'm looking forward to seeing more soon.
11-04-2011, 05:03 AM
cC.DOMINO™
+rep great photos, each one tells a story, you capture the feeling of the subject well. Keep the photos coming you have real talent. Thanks for sharin.
11-04-2011, 07:23 AM
Gaaf
Woah DM commenting on a photo thread. thats rare,
anyway, Your portraits are realy nice. and they all tell indeed a story wich is good :)
Your landscape photo's look a bit lq to me but maybe thats becouse they are sized down or something..
and the landscape lack a bit comp like said before.
Defnicaly keep going on with this :)
11-04-2011, 11:30 PM
Atelier
Thanks a ton for the encouragement guys. I did not expect this sort of reaction at all considering it's my first time o_O
11-05-2011, 07:02 AM
cC.Aleksander
These are some really nice photos here! Some great portraits, and good landscapes
Looking forward to see more