Dark and Light Pill LPs

Dark
http://htaorednu.deviantart.com/#/d4fqw91

and

Light
http://htaorednu.deviantart.com/#/d4fqwh2

made all in c4d used the GSG light kit pro

they lack aesthetic value like most of your stuff. not bad things at all but they are scrapped wips imo

It looks a bit too clean and scattered - without a purpose. Try doing something creative with what you've made (angle/perspective, placement, colours).

Small detail: although it looks like the coloured parts of the pills are slightly transparent, you cannot see the black part through it.

(watermark is also in the way =P)

the lamps don't cause any lighting? o.O

I feel like you can do way better than this, and i kind of agree with WR, it kind of feels like a WIP, kiu though :D