misaka sig

http://i885.photobucket.com/albums/a...aph/misaka.png

The text being nearly centralized takes away the focal, the face is blurred which I don't understand.

The smudge also covers the render which should be the focal, so I'm not too sure what you're going for in this.

I think you should work on the composition of your fx, and try and get a direction for the flow, probably bottom left to top right, and work on the colors instead of that blue, red would probably be better. keep workin though mann

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Originally Posted by JoShO

The text being nearly centralized takes away the focal, the face is blurred which I don't understand.

The smudge also covers the render which should be the focal, so I'm not too sure what you're going for in this.

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Originally Posted by Maietrix

I think you should work on the composition of your fx, and try and get a direction for the flow, probably bottom left to top right, and work on the colors instead of that blue, red would probably be better. keep workin though mann

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i was trying for a bit of lightening with the smudge. my question is. THE FLOW IS RIGHT @*(@#*@(* THERE! i just don't understand how it's not clearly illustrated. w.e i give up.

the render is quite crappy so it stayed like that even though i sharpened it.

Here, I circled the parts in red that mess up the flow
http://i102.photobucket.com/albums/m...ogypsytips.png

I see what you were trying to do with the smudge. Don't give up man, flow is there but its not consistent, I had the same problem with flow just keep practicing and you will get it eventually, kiu you gots potential bro :)

now this is great help! i love gfxvoid. thanks alot!