1st abstract thing

or whatever its called xD

http://pic.mk/images/m1iph.png

http://pic.mk/images/oTExU.png

Yeah very shitty . :/ and kinda empty something else what should i focus next on ?

top one looks better because the bottom looks lq but your losing your flow try keep same flow as your smudge effects with your light effects on top and also id try and get more colors in . and lose the text . id also work on shadowing with your lighting .

Stick with the first version, you should add some background fx to make it less empty