stuck in technology

http://i43.tinypic.com/f1dax.png

V2: not sure 'bout the black border....
http://i40.tinypic.com/2upcjsm.png

w/o imo opinion better than your last one as well, smudge could be detailed a tad more but overall its a nice tag face seems a tad LQ/oversharpened but the colors overall are good :D

too flat, add more contrast. looks good tho

Put some bright green highlights on some parts of that smudge and you sir have a hawt tag, great right now though, just feel like it needs some pop :D

with out is better and i think u should make u smudge more rough then soft so it grooves in and like kin said add in some brighter colors in with the smudge nice tag tho but looks un finished .

Pretty dope smudge mannn I like da SMOOTH feel :)

i love the lightning, great tag man :o

very nice feeling so relaxing and soothing

I see only one problem mate.. Colors, make them more vibrant.. Also <3 the border :D