http://ufu.co.il/files/ayu7hablr27d9tlaijdu.png
CnC plz :o
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doesn't have any flow. looks like u started to give it flow but then u lost it on the right side continue what u did on the left on the right side and u will have better flow imo. also id remove that text doesn't look good there just looks messy . i however do like the colors and light source looks like coming from bottom left and in back .
It looks a bit flat, and I can barely read the text. I don't see why you would add the double side borders though, maybe one would look good.
