After a week or two break not doing tags, I feel inspired suddenly and make a quick smudge/fx late at night before school in the morning.
Anyway.. it seems a little bit empty, but im not sure what else to add. Maybe a few more fractals tomorrow after school or @ school. (My only real beef is with bottom right side.)
Yes it does seem a bit empty to me. Im liking the colors but honestly it looks like good smudging and a render on top with some lighting/photofilters. Know what i mean? Idk if i would use fractals or not. The way i use them it cludders and becomes a bit chaotic but it would brighten the tag up.
11-24-2011, 09:12 AM
JoShO
Add some sharper smudges for the foreground, probably on linear dodge, will look awesome.
I like it so far. :)
here's V2.. I followed a lil bit of your idea but im not really a fan of sharpening smudges a lot so i mainly made some linear dodge light fx and liquified the render around the sights to make it sorta melt away a bit as well as fix edges.
a few more frontal fx too and minor colour changes, i think this looks better.
11-25-2011, 05:30 PM
JoShO
Definitely an improvement, (ditch the border though). Blending is nice.