logo/wallpaper

i'm a starting music producer same as my freind
we are working on a song together and it's a long time ago i used photoshop
so i decided to make a logo/wallpaper for on the background of our songs http://fc09.deviantart.net/fs70/i/20...e9-d4hkej5.png


cnc?

you can do better :P trust me

well i haven't made something in a while

The Line looks like a kid just drew it...please don't take this harsh but...needs lots of improvements...I've seen some nice work from you...

Well in all honesty its just a gradient :O So i would start over. Idk what to do, just make it look nice, and if you keep the BG a gradient, make the text and other effects way nicer than they are now

well, appart from that the name isn't that original in my opinion, the piece isn't really good
defiantely needs colors, or some sort of effect which will make it attractive
now it's just plain

Even the text seems slightly blurred, wallpapers/logos should be crisp, definitely should be a few more fx around the text to make it look more interesting.

Needs some pop.
Add some texture to the background
Give it a bold colour. Make it scream READ ME!

Logo's are suppose to be simple. Work with the text more.

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Originally Posted by Allseeyineye

well, appart from that the name isn't that original in my opinion, the piece isn't really good
defiantely needs colors, or some sort of effect which will make it attractive
now it's just plain

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how it's not original