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http://i857.photobucket.com/albums/a...tacyv2/MAg.jpg

Please guys, i tried hard on this. Please take the time to leave a comment and help.

~ Environment

I'm kinda distracted by that cut line on the bottom left corner, and the flow seems to go everywhere.
It's not the most useful render when it comes to flow too IMO because of all them lines going everywhere.. Colours look okay, but some are too dark

Try a different render that will not be distracting, and like Nyaa said, try to improve the flow. I personally could see a smaller render here, and it would make room for a more defined background.