Illidan tag

Did this about two weeks ago but never posted it, thoughts?

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...in-d4huk39.png

Too messy, has no real flow, depth needs work, lighting is off and doesn't look natural, overall it needs work I'd read up on some tutorials.

Lighting is off because it has no affect on his body. Dodge some areas on him that are alligned with the lighting.
The lighting is also washed out, compared to the rest of the piece. Try to remove the bubble C4D's and work on your lighting, keep the piece more simple.