this is my out come, i'm showing the color copy& black and white copy. text sucks, but i suck with text as well. meh i tried. please let me know how you feel about it.
thanks guys appreciate it, anything i can work on?
12-12-2011, 02:36 PM
sirenzo
it has lack of quality and the color version is better imo but the font is a distraction from the focal . fix the quality and i think it be a much better tag , and i would also try not leaving so much negative space on the right .
12-12-2011, 02:54 PM
Aether
The text is pretty distracting but other then that it looks pretty sick, I prefer the black and white one though:)
12-13-2011, 06:37 PM
twohigh
as i said, i suck with text. and i agree with you both when i look at the tag the first thing i see is the text. bleh. as for the negative space, i know. :/ the request asked for a width of 500. and im not one to enjoy big canvases. i had nothing to fill it with without overdoing the fx and taking away from the main focal. thanks for the cnc though. appreciate it guys.