vegas night (my first post here)

this is my first post here
and my last sig


http://fc07.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...ns-d4i3ez5.png


comments

- work on lighting
- Depth
- Contrast
- Too LQ
- Sharpen it up a bit
- Burn/Dodge certain areas
- Needs a couple of FGFX
- KiU !

thanks for the recommendations

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Originally Posted by +ta.KroniiK

- work on lighting
- Depth
- Contrast
- Too LQ
- Sharpen it up a bit
- Burn/Dodge certain areas
- Needs a couple of FGFX
- KiU !

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i actually thought the lighting was spot on, as for depth yes there is none. I thought the quality was okay and in fact a little over sharpened.. sure the face needs more sharpening but the Las Vegas letters seemed a little over done. as for burn and dodge theres not much you can do with a tag like this. the render is too big and cropped IMO, make it a tad bit smaller, add some depth by adding some blurr to the bg, and make it darker. and try and work on those eraser skills, from what i can see around the head you can see all the soft brushing of the eraser around the head, almost as if you erased out of the green abstract to fit the head in.. kiu