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second post on this site, would like some cnc. my gf asked me to make one of will smith, he's one of our favorite actors. ignore the text, one of my latest tags was ripped and claimed as someone elses. just a precaution.
http://i1131.photobucket.com/albums/...ithtwohigh.jpg
this is v2
http://i1131.photobucket.com/albums/...htwohighv2.jpg
oh and my gf would like some cnc too :s
http://i1131.photobucket.com/albums/...ygfx/photo.jpg
http://i1131.photobucket.com/albums/...ithtwohigh.jpg
^^The composition is nice and you have some lighting in there that works well, the text, border could both be removed to help improve it, the focal seems a bit low quality, perhaps some sharpening of the face area and some blending of the lighting layers might help. Keep going with the c4d usage tho you seem to be able to create some flow with them which helps.
http://i1131.photobucket.com/albums/...ygfx/photo.jpg
^^ Nice use of colors, only things that might help is to simplify it a little bit in the bg, it's chaotic. Try a few lines flowing together that don't distract from your focal of the heart shape :)
The digital painting of the heart is pretty cool, nice confident lines, good colors and color variations. The background is a bit chaotic as Dom mentioned, but that's a thing.
lmfao thx she'll appreciate the comments, as for your recommendations for my tag, ill make some adjustments and post a v2. thanks again
For Will Smith.
Great composition, and really liked the variation of colours. However, the focal isn't that strong. Try working on the depths of field, and try giving off some "rich" colour in your V2. Gl.
For the Heart painting:
I don't know what to say, to be honest. I'm never good at traditional art. xD Sorry.
updated with v2
LP needs depth flow and remember rule of thirds, lightings a bit shit, spend more time than 30 seconds on a piece, this is art, not pictionary.
Wil smith piece is good, needs a bit of work on flow and something to make it pop a little more though.
thanks for the comments appreciate it
