spidey(fast one)

http://i.imgur.com/pHK3L.jpg

looks good man your getting better, but i have one issue and there is too much light on spidermans face looks like you have sharpened his face and body too much aswell.
but great job man, proud of you :)

i tried to correct his face, he looks like an alien, but i couldn't do anything cuz im too lazy for that, thanks for the CnC sparry.

Cool colors, but the blue on the body looks really wrong. I bet this would look cool with some FG stuff, a bit more fx.

thanks uriah :)

i dont like how washed out the color is, looks awful.
His face is also too sharp.