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Also made with that awsum tutorial bud now a bit more of myself

i have to fixx the lighting bud i want to know what you guy's think about 't

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/20...99-d4kdo9k.png

i fucking love the colored version, it's one of the best i've seen.

I would suggest looking at some tutorials. The lighting is fine imo but text and everything else could be better.

You're blurring too much of your image to try and achieve depth. It should be a more subtle effect. Your stock also has a lot of jagged lines around the edges, which really need fixing. Your light is also coming from the wrong source, and the light blob feels really unnatural, and is too readily apparent.