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Ah what is going wrong here xD I figured this would be a pretty sweet render to use but theres so many dark areas that its rather hard to work with.
C&C? I'm completely stumped as to what to do with it - or is it just one of those hopeless failures? D=
http://i1041.photobucket.com/albums/...ams/sig369.jpg
looks a bit over contrasted.. focal is in the middle, a no no.. no color flow, text don't flow, no flow period. bokeh is like waahht? redo.. word.
ya it looks like about 20 steps ago you made a mistake and just kept going with it making it worse. I suggest posting the .psd so we can see what you actually did here so we can tell you specifically where you went wrong. but it needs some work.
Completely agree, must have restarted this sig several times already - might just give up on the render.
