http://i.imgur.com/mtdIU.png
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chop off a bit of the right site; it kills the depth...
also the red/pinky things above his head distract a bit
other then that me likezz..
Yeah, agreed, the right side dithers to nothing and unbalanced everything. There are a couple small distracting spots that could do with a tiny bit more attention but otherwise it is looking good. The lighting on the left side with the red streak looks amazing.
lighting is nice background looks empty though.
