Le Crysis

Heyy, made another tagg, not as good as my previous one, but still pretty happy with it:

attempt on my always failing text:

http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/7796/crysistagg1.png


without text:

http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/4098/crysistagg2.png

It's a bit empty, I know, but I ran out of Idea;s

colors don't go well, good placement of the focal, horrible lighting and messy effects, try again bro and im me your results will try help u get basics again . least i can do bro .

^^ It's also has a lot of negative space on the left side, you should try to work in some more abstract artifacts to fill it up maybe. Also try some perspective text effects as well instead of the bland straight text. Keep it up though!

Colors are fine, they just need better execution. It seems FHS so it's lacking motion. Kiu.

lol only because u like to use them colors your self derosion ;p;

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Originally Posted by sirenzo

lol only because u like to use them colors your self derosion ;p;

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Touche lul.