Rate My Tag!

http://i.imgur.com/a474p.png

Any feedback any tips is apprecited. :)

Tbh its a little difficult to see the right focal, I mean you have 3 different things going on there.
I think its great that you started to use a better size though, just stick to one focal point (ie the thing in the middle) and work around that. Also experiment with some text, it doesn't need to stand out too much.
Your getting there though, keep working on the things I just said and once you've done that finish it off with colouring and blur/sharpen for depth.
Try experimenting using gradient maps on the colour front. Also to give it a more consistent style I always like to add on a bit of Lightness from the Hue/Sat menu, maybe +6.

I'm sure a few people here will say to not put the render in the middle, naturally Im not saying it because I'll look like a complete hypocritical tit =P

Edit: Ill just add on to that, with text is usually not a good idea to use any effects like stroke or bevel&emboss (thats a killer). Sometimes you can get away with a few things like a drop shadow that helps the text stand out - but isn't really visible of you don't know its there.

Edit 2: Also try using some resources like C4Ds, Fractals or smudging, sometimes you can even fill the background just by using the render.

God darn it I will make you produce a sweet tag if I have to die trying =P You can call me Qui Gon and you shall be known as... Obi wan.

I try to make middle one to be the main focal point but i think i failed to do that(trying to sharpen it) :tongue:. Need a lot and lot practising for making a great tag and yeah i just started the photoshop around 29 days(if i remember correctly i dived in the photoshop designing on 1st of January).
Thanks for the tips and really appreciated your time to comment on this.

Tbh the most part in making a sig is the colouring afterwards, lining the foundations can be as easy, or as difficult as you want it to be.
You can do whatever you want to the background though providing that the main focal is still clearly visible.

Focal is too small, if the one in the center is your focal.