Gaze

http://i1257.photobucket.com/albums/...GazeSmudge.png

Flow could be better. Still trying to work on smudging. Thoughts?

too empty on the left, lose the borders.. unfinished IMO

the border distracts...
rules on borders are simple... either add a white or a black one.... if it doesn't work... leave it out!!
other then that? hmmm maybe tone down the white on his face just a bit and you've got a sexy tag!!
me likez!!