Forgotten One

I made this for Xelo for helping me out when I returned, anybody have any CnC for it?

http://img528.imageshack.us/img528/6551/gfxversion.png

SEXY

Anybody have any tips to improve this? I tried adding text but it seemed to break up the flow so it was in the end removed.

Hey Theo, big thank you for this!!
It's sexy as it is!! don't change it!!

:)

XL


ps: I love the render!