Confliction

Wanted to do something different so i made an abstract painting :l
repainted :0 http://colddegree.deviantart.com/art/Confliction-285156658

Honestly dude I want to like it, I really do cuz most of your paintings are amazing but I'm just not feeling this one. Need some more contrast, or less contrast depending on how ya look at it I guess, a ton of lighting but now much for shadowing, yanno? It's all just really too bright to me and makes the colors look way brighter then what they need to be. It had the possibility to be awesome, but the overall brightness just killed it for me.

It Looks like a mess to me, nothing like what you're capable of.