meh.. screwing around fast work

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cant see much for the quality... im working on my laptop but it's hooked up to my tv through HDMI since my screen is broken.. so its kinda hard to tell how you will all see it.. let me know what you think...

i like this but u have allot of negitive space on the left . and lighting on look dull could use some better lighting . but kiu m8