Infamous

fresh thing :D
http://pic.mk/images/B4xrR.png

I do not like the text at all. Takes way too much focus away from everything else. Pretty decent aside from that, but it feels kind of incomplete to be honest.

renders is too choppy, doesn't seem like much was done to this. text has to go.. keep working at it

It's okay, just work on blending the render with the background and maybe take out the text or you could resize it and put it somewhere closer to your focal. Keep at it, this signature has a lot of potential.

Too empty w/o the text :S . .
http://pic.mk/images/xh9gH.png

Don't like how the focal sticks out too much. That's just me though.