Terrorize!

I've made minor improvements to a tag I originally posted.

Here's my first attempt:

http://i1223.photobucket.com/albums/...2/Megatron.jpg

Secondly, here's the modified version with a few issues addressed.

http://i1223.photobucket.com/albums/...er02/OMEGA.jpg

Tell me what you think and which one you like best. Thank You :)

Both are nice tags, youve sorted out the colour issue in the second one but the first felt a bit lighter with that nice gradient over it.

definately improved, you created depth and fixed the colors
good tagg, except for the text ;)

Maybe make the text a bit more subtle? Right now my it draws my attention towards it. Remove the clipmask and just make it cleaner to make it blend better.

Thanks for the input guys. Yes, I realized the text can distract from the focal a bit so I'm going to fix that. Thank again :)

Still too bright.