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Bit too much sharpen, give it some depth as well.
Aside from that I actually really like this, its a great tag and the lighting works well.
Yeah, definitely oversharpened, and the colors could use a bit more pop, but aside from that, solid.
Work on your contrast :)
Too messy. Can't see the actual focal try adding some depth with some blur.
Too cluttered with c4ds, focal needs some bounce.