Cat Girl

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Big thing that went wrong is that the sig isn't balanced, almost nothing on the left side :/

Again empty on the left and the sig is a little large. Text is awful imo.

Again loving the blue colouring but the render isn't matching, highlights are white yet lighting is blue. The c4d's look out of place.

Never use C4D on a black background as it makes it more obvious that they were used than if the blend to something else.

It's not a bad signature, but not great either.

Lighting seems forced and blend it better.

You are trying to create depth with your c4ds and I love it, and a usual game I play myself with my c4d tags.

I have to agree withthe others, the black is too black for your afffects, get in some decent lighting in between you effects to help you play up the depth more.
She also just appears to be sitting on top of it all, imo she could use some blending in with her b/g.

I like it though and think it would move better with some touch up ^^

P.S I don't like the amount of topaz surounding your focal tho, imo should clean that up.

Thanks for the CNC guys, I'll try and fix it up.
@Slave, I wish i could use Topaz :x

ha ha cat girl.