Newest Signature (KID CUDI)

http://i.imgur.com/xRWbr.jpg

I started this one at my old job about a month ago and I had to move to I had to start working on it when I got back!

Finished, so thanks!

CnC please.

diggin the text

Crop off some of the right side. The text placement needs work and it stands out too much.

The text is very interesting and for once I like it and it's placement.

I feel the red light you have on him is off and I would suggest you going into your lighting effects instead and play aroundw ith the settings/colour and find something more "realistic" to show your light source.

I also agree with the right side being empty. as well as for a wallpaper in large would be fitting but for a tag it lacks flow and distracts from the focal.
IMO I would move the focal more to the center and give a little more attention to the bg, danno exactly what it needs back there, but more flow and maybe some different colour leading from red out.
gl ^^

EDIT: I looked at it a 3rd time and I think what it's really missing here is depth in shadow/light. So maybe you don;t need too much attention to the b/g you just need to show that there is more depth there using some darker reds/shadow etc.

@Slave I basically smudged up the left side :) If thats what you guys meant I did it :)!