Soilder on a mission

http://img217.imageshack.us/img217/9...namission1.png
how is it? :S

Much too dark, and looks burnt in parts.

Great idea, I think what this tag needs is on the right side a far off distant light source helping with your depth/light play effect.

The lighting is a really clever concept imo It just needs some more depth - It would also be nice if you could add some white in there somewhere, the blue light reflecting on the render as blue seems a bit awkward.