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Yea yea I know no light source.
I was just messing around when I made this so yea it's partly done I just need some input on it.

umm its a odd tag i dunno if the text in the middle is the focal or the person that pops out is the focal u need to follow some tuts and get a better idea on how to compose your tags this just looks like alot of stuff thrown together imo

I would have to agree here with oats, if it was just the text and you worked outward in same style/fashion that would be pretty epic, but then I see so much going on behind it that has no flow and then the random person with hanging off seems very messy and out of place.

I like to use a system, and it always starts with 2 things one, my focal and the second my colour choices, after that it's always "how do I help it" and not about "what else can I add" If this makes any sense ?:S

Try and bring down your interest to one thing then work around it and not clutter it so much.
interesting ideas tho ^^ kiu

Do you know what Tutorials are? If you have alreadsy used some then your tags are un usual, which is cool and keep it up if it is.

lol I know what Tutorials are.
This is something I threw together in a spark of insperation

It's always good to try out new things and test the waters ^^
The better artists always imo feel their way in the dark before they come out larger success then they could have thought possible ^^