I made an invitation for my 16th birthday

http://i42.tinypic.com/4j2ts6.png

Don't mind the text or anything, I was just wondering what you guys think about it. I think the overall look is good, but it needs some minor tweaks at the vector speakers.

You said it...top vector needs a lot of work...don't fit in well with the overall design.

- The pink feather effect you tried going for behind the....pink orb, doesn't look nice either...did you like bevel it XD...lol.
- Far Left side yellow brush...no point..get rid of it...let the image show on light overaly still...looks nice like that.
- Sixteen text is not centered properly..suggest working on it, and you cut it bad...look at the edges...
- My Super Sweet text needs work...gotta move it up a lil...bottom of p goes under the yellow stripe.
- Kostenloze Consumpties text, needs to be properly aligned, the K word is too much ahead of the C word.

:D...thought I'd let you know mate.

I like it actually, the overall layout is nice, and the colour scheme. I would work on the text a bit.

Yeah, I will take some more time to align the text, I will probably do that in Illustrator since it has good alignment tools.
And as for the pink orb, ofcourse I didn't bevel it xD That's probably one of the most useless blending options. I will also take another look into that.
Thanks for your comments!

Bevel I meant for the wings behind the orb...looks bad.

its nice but r u a girl or a guy ?? guys dont have sweet 16s lol unless u are a damn rich ass lol

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Originally Posted by +s9.Oath

its nice but r u a girl or a guy ?? guys dont have sweet 16s lol unless u are a damn rich ass lol

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lol this :P

I thought it said, "I lost my virginity at 16".
But good job, I might ask you for one in the near future.

whoa, this looks sick...can i come?

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Originally Posted by +s9.KroniiK

Bevel I meant for the wings behind the orb...looks bad.

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Nah, I just copied the original wings layer and applied a Hue-Saturation filter to give it a lighter color. But you're right, it does look kind of bad.

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Originally Posted by +s9.Oath

its nice but r u a girl or a guy ?? guys dont have sweet 16s lol unless u are a damn rich ass lol

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Well, I wouldn't say I'm rich, but I'm not poor either. And I just want to host a big party, and the text: "You are invited to my sixteenth birthday party" sounds quite stupid IMO, so I just used the words sweet sixteen because it sounds cool.

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Originally Posted by Bogui

I thought it said, "I lost my virginity at 16".
But good job, I might ask you for one in the near future.

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Lolwat.
And sure, just send me a pm for anything :)

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Originally Posted by Wolvy

whoa, this looks sick...can i come?

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Thanks!
And sure, if you don't mind coming to Bloemendaal, The Netherlands.