http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/4...lpapercopy.jpg
By bigt7799 at 2012-04-03
http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/8154/jamalcopy.jpg
By bigt7799 at 2012-04-03
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By bigt7799 at 2012-04-03
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By bigt7799 at 2012-04-03
The second looks like it has the potential to be something interesting, it has some nice colours and a cool overall style, it just feels a bit lq and messy in some areas.
Oh and get rid of the text ofcourse xD Tbh I think it would work better just without the render and use it as an abstract piece.