Raiden | New Tag

New tag. I think it's my best so far. And I suck at text.

w/ Text
http://i783.photobucket.com/albums/y...f04/Raiden.png

w/o Text
http://i783.photobucket.com/albums/y...idenNoText.png

There's no Focal point in my opinion, I don't know what to looks at.
Kind of looks flatish.

Tried to fix it, and added some shades of purple. Tried to bring him out more
Outcome:
http://i783.photobucket.com/albums/y...4/RaidenV3.png

2nd one is sure better though color is a bit monotonic, render needs to blend more with the depth. Text needs quality other than its not a bad tag.

Thanks Flayzed and edwin. :)