Squall signature

Heres a decent sig i made... first time i made a light source ;)
CnC and rate plz

http://i1061.photobucket.com/albums/...337/squall.png

http://i1061.photobucket.com/albums/...squalltext.png
hardcore text effect fail lol

not bad at all ... txt isnt to horrible might be more effective with the blue text matching the color of the rest of the work...that tealish color...maybe even a vertical text instead in the empty space

Your Light Source is off...in the render the light is hitting the guy from the right..while you put it in the left...try dodging/burning...etc...to make it work properly.

Your guy(render) has stroke on...either badly cut...or you put it on there to hide the edges...which looks bad, get rid of it.

And right now it seems like, background, add render, add 2 different c4ds on top if it...and a little light source...you gotta put more time into making your tags, and thinking how things work out mate.

Keep it up though, don't quit.

Oh and keep on reading tutorials...to get the basics.