BREAKDANCE'

HELLO!

Le me was boring, so I made this one.
It's not finished yet, because I'm tired.
Tomorrow I'm going to finish it and I'll show it again on this forum.

Hope you like till now.
I do, because on this stock I can put alot of effects, around her arms, body, legs, everything!
+ she is beautiful
I love her body.
Lol, ok enough..

https://fbcdn-sphotos-a.akamaihd.net...00513798_n.jpg

it's kinda big because I dindn't wanted this in a small signature.
And I like the colorcombination grey/orange.

So free your mind,
love.

And the stock:
http://i48.tinypic.com/2upbmea.jpg

Mmm, the effects don't really flow well with her body, they kind of just make it look messy, and the text I'm not a big fan of it pulls all the attenton away from the focal. I suggest making the effects more clean and have the flow with her and burn the edges of the image to make it pop.

A bra under another bra, thats just how I role.

Personally I love it, the text works perfectly even though text like that usually fails, I like how you've blurred the background.
I do agree with Fork about the 'pop' though, I'm personally a fan of lighter images that just work out cleaner, try throwing over a gradient map (black n white) too to bring out the colours a bit.

Edit: So I was thinking something like this,
http://i.imgur.com/F6G1K.jpg

(Nice of imgur to reduce that down therefore destroying the quality, wasn't it =))

i love the color combo as well and the stock is great. The effects on the arms work well but i cant say the same for the effecs over the legs. And the text, i agree with Dystelo
Cant wait to see it finished :D

agreed with above, it's a lil messy but not bad for what it is. here's the render of that girl
http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/8665/dancerw.png I was gonnuse it a while back but never did.

Edit: Ah shit wrong thread.