Any better? :l

So I took a look at some tuts for smudging.. This was my outcome what should I do to improve?

http://i1185.photobucket.com/albums/.../Smudgetag.png

http://i.tinyuploads.com/7QxmJ3.jpg

Thanks for the feedback, yeah the tut said soft brush with linear dodge for the lighting but it ended up being waaaaay bright so I touched it down :l