http://i156.photobucket.com/albums/t...3/GirlAbst.jpg
Printable View
Oversharpened, and the contrast by her face is off. Feel like it should be a vertical tag because right now it's got a weird focal.
Some blending is needed. Focal is skewering my perception of it. Too much in a horizontal view.
Blur a bit, blend parts of her body. Not really necessary to focus on the whole render.
Like the text. Overall concept is really nice.
