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Topaz killed this piece.
- Your Lighting is not off....but this piece looks a little weird man.
- Text is...not that well either.
if he darken the right leg the light will be better. and the text hell yeah!
- Topaz [?] why would you use topaz? hmmmm...
Yeah the topaz is a little overkilled, so maybe set ot lighten and down to about 20%?
And the text takes too much attention, it's like another focal, so maybe it would've been better along his arm which also would've added to the flow
In a funny sort of way I like this, even with the topaz (although It would also be nice to see it without it), the only thing that really stops the topaz being as effective in this piece is that lighting youve got up in the corner there.
Its like looking at a cartoon style piece with some clean-realistic element, just isn't working.
Its a nice tag though.
Incidentally is his left arm larger than his right? Dirty boy.
