Freedom Ride | Shniper

SOTW entry for another forum
CnC please

http://i1061.photobucket.com/albums/...tridersotw.png

It's really LQ and the render needs to be blended more, but I like the style of the tag, and the ideas, also the watermark of SoTW looks a little strange imo.

Looks very blurry.

I really can't tell if its just because I've had a pint, or that sig looks incredibly blurry.

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Originally Posted by Shniper1337

SOTW entry for another forum
CnC please

http://i1061.photobucket.com/albums/...tridersotw.png

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A few things here
1) yeah it's blurry so create a new layer, apply the image (image>apply image) and go to filter >sharpen>sharpen
If you now go to edit>fade sharpen, make it look a bit more natural, should help

2)The sotw looks real out of place, there's plenty of points that could have been moved to, the headlight of his bike for one, and the chain behind it is cut off

3)You've made a decent attempt at flow, well done for that, with the C4D in the bottom right corner, but it should've been behind the wheel and in front of the spotlight, instead of the other way round, to make depth more realistic

Overall it's a fairly decent attempt and I would suggest doing it again to try and improve, well done though