Progression | annokill

here it is C&C pls

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yg-rA4Q6HfI&hd=1

Never been a fan of most youtube contests, gl though.

Hello? No feedback?

Sorry, I don't have much to say for that type of "work."

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Hello? No feedback?

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It's pretty boring if you ask me.

To start it of, theres a lot of dead time before a LQ maze circle appears. This is followed by identical brushes, flipped horizontally, splatterbrushes(all in the same tone of black), some more arrows that you decided to flip a little different this time, a random white butterfly that you never touch again. Added a gradient frame around the piece, added the BG stock, some kind of fractal to give small blue hints. Applied more gradients, and finished it off with fat, black text.

You could have done so much more to make it interesting, the main thing I asume was the maze pattern since the text somewhat includes the word "Maze". Yet you choose to smack a butterfly in the center of it and not do anything interesting with it, a simple clipmask could have exceled it and made it the pleasing to look at.

A clip mask w/ what? Texture or? Pls tell i want to become better.

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A clip mask w/ what? Texture or? Pls tell i want to become better.

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A texture or whatever would have made it look more interesting, right now it's just plain and white. Make it pop to draw more attention towards the middle, maybe lower the opacity to make the maze more visible. I would have tried a different maze pattern on it.

Ok thnx for your feedback, anyone else?

Yeah it seems quite bland, to be honest. You could add a slightly textured paper background, and make the spray cans more visible, since they are technically more important than the BG itself, and the depth itself isn't too great. Try to make it look like it was spray painted on a wall or something, and give it more thought and throw some ideas into it :) It has potential, but right now. it looks too bland :) Add some flavor, man, I know you've got it in you :)

bland? i have never heard of that word, and thnx, i already entered ( deadline ) but ill do a remake/edit and upload it ;)