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Fix the contrast, give the illusion of depth but doesn't have it. Sharpen her face also, he body sticks out more than her face.
That canvas is way too big. I would cut some of the left side out, and the bottom
She looks oversharpened and there's theres these weird little squiggles everywhere that kill the flow
i like it
Your video is all out of proportion. You should record in the right aspect ratio so that the time lapse looks appealing. If you want to utilize the empty space on the side you could add your DA profile name or the name of your YT channel. Another thing, and this is just a personal thing, but the music didn't really appeal to me so I didn't watch the whole thing.
Aside from that, the colours and lighting are good, but I gotta agree that the canvas is way too big. Add a border top and bottom, or on the sides and see how that looks. Also, as another design idea, crop a thin strip and add it to the side or something. Think outside the box and work on how you can use your space.
Example: http://i1153.photobucket.com/albums/.../Water-Sig.png
