"Gaze" C4D Tag

http://i.imgur.com/AcJBu.png

Work on when the light it getting right on to her hair fix the lighting.

Other then that your good.

No flow.

for me it has good flow

Flow seems consistent enough, but I'd work on depth. Nice tag btw :)

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Originally Posted by edwinpabito

for me it has good flow

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How?

.Void, can you ever post something longer than one line?

For me personally it has good flow, lighting and depth - infact Im a little bit in love with it =p Theres a small amount of lq going on but its not particularly noticeable, I just love the concept. Will be sure to check out the tutorial.

Something seems off with this piece, maybe the positioning of the focal. Idk it could be the C4D's something is just awkward. Like pointed out before the flow might be the case its just seems weird. I feel like this piece would have been amazing but something just doesnt fit right with me here.