First smudge - Username

Hello,
this is my first smudge tag.
Cnc.

http://i46.tinypic.com/6geh3m.png

And is The Rule of Third good in this tag?

As a response to your rule of thirds question, it probably should've been the top right crossover you used, instead of the left. Because using the left has given you that huge dead space on the right. The text looks out of place, so that's something to work on, I suck at text myself so I'm not that helpfull on that aspect, but you have a good flow going

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Originally Posted by Intrepidmisfortune

As a response to your rule of thirds question, it probably should've been the top right crossover you used, instead of the left. Because using the left has given you that huge dead space on the right. The text looks out of place, so that's something to work on, I suck at text myself so I'm not that helpfull on that aspect, but you have a good flow going

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Thnx for the tips. :)

OH something I forgot to mention, work on lighting vecause the shadows on the render indicate a light source form the top right. Whereas yours is top left

nice tag for your first smudge.

Thnx. :)